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Monday 1 August 2016

Aliens Stole My Car

This is my poem called 'Aliens Stole My Car'.I chose this work because I was really proud of it.We were learning to use 4 lines in each verse and use rhyming words.I really enjoyed making up my own verses and rhyming each sentence.What I found hard was making up my own verses because you have to make it rhyme and make it related to the poem.Making up my own sentence was probably one of the hard things but it helps know how to relate my own verses to each other.




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  1. Anonymous1 August 2016 at 12:12

    Hi Salisi,
    I really like your poem, it flowed really well and i like your choice or words.
    please come check out my blog:http://paroagreygeorgiam.blogspot.co.nz/
    thanks :)

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    1. Unknown2 August 2016 at 17:27

      Thank you Georgia I would love to check out your blog! :)

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  2. Unknown13 October 2016 at 10:27

    Wowi like how you used a lot of interesting words.this made me think of the time when i did a poem like that.Have you tryed putting more full stops

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    1. Unknown13 October 2016 at 10:29

      Wowi huh thanks for looking at my work Nila ill be sure to do that next time

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